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Your Quiet Words, Wash Over My Soul
Bring Healing To Wounds Long Past
Your Quiet Being, Surrounds Mine
Locks Me Safe Within
And Your Stillness, Gives Me Strength

Your Eyes, Hold Mysteries…
But No Black Secrets
Your Eyes, Hold Mine
My Secrets Fade To Dust
And Your Stillness, Gives Me Strength

Your Hands, Lightly Lift Mine
Not To Claim, Nor To Kiss
Your Hands, Return Mine, To Me
Until Another Day
And Your Stillness, Gives Me Strength

Your Notes, That Wish Me Well
Believe, Love, And Carry Hope
Your Notes, Full Of Nothings
Won’t You Smile In Spite Of?
And Your Stillness, Gives Me Strength

You Ask, Honesty
Anticipation, Expectation, Elevation
You Ask, I Ask Too
Slowly Enters, The Waves Of Life
And Your Stillness, Gives Me Strength
       Your Stillness, Gives Me Strength
©2007-2009 ~EbonyRoze
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First poem in around 2 and a half years.. so be gentle with the critique yeh :P .. but no " *Huggl3* so gud!" crap either.. fakeness is just as horrible..

Written about a friend, which is unusual for me, i find it really hard to write about or for friends, or anyone. just dnt flow as easily for me. but yeh. enjoy..
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i love how you continue with teh Your, and You, it keeps the poem going. Also how you've put so much emotion into your words
"Your Eyes, Hold Mine
My Secrets Fade To Dust
And Your Stillness, Gives Me Strength"

its so calm yet emotional...

then the end its amazing...

"Your Ask, Honesty
Anticipation, Expectation, Elevation
You Ask, I Ask Too
Slowly Enters, The Waves Of Life
And Your Stillness, Gives Me Strength
Your Stillness, Gives Me Strength "

awesome, i would right more but i'd be banned for flooding. i love all your writing, its never fake

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Rawr
thankyou heaps hun. it means alot that u said so much and explained exactly what u meant
yeh when i wrote it, it was all very calm and quiet.. just thinking u know.. each line has an actual moment that i remember with this person, theres a story behind each part.. so yeh.
i love it :heart: .. lol was god to read and glenns ryt it flowed nicly but now i really wana know hu its bou lol.. o well ill live

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pay no attention. i'm a soccer player.
well i would more its just.... i dunno... that u might think it stupid or sumin

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Rawr
lmao no way:P write me what else yah think in a note to me then:P
i sent u a note

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Rawr
well i all ready told u i luv it bt yea i so wana nw hu it bowt nw lmao gud tyms ae luk 4ward 2 readn sum more sn ae

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